With Tim Burton’s Alice in Wonderland released tomorrow in UK cinemas, I thought it would be an opportune moment to create a Folding Mirror poem on that theme.
Lewis Carroll’s Alice in Wonderland story does indeed seem a very relevant theme for a Folding Mirror poem, with the normal world above the rabbit hole inverted down below.
So, with the folding middle line acting as the rabbit hole, I thought I’d create the FM poem with the normal world in the top half and wonderland below.
The poem mirrors either in the mirroring lines either side of the middle, with a word count of:
5-9-7-6-5-6-4-3 (6) 3-4-6-5-6-7-9-5
world of order with antipodies
food clearly labelled so you know what it is
walk in straight lines and follow signs
which way, makes sense, linear lines
laws maintain straight and narrow
formal protocol for you to follow
people work to time
regular clockwork chime
another world down the rabbit hole
it’s mad-hatter’s luck
time does not work
cheshire cat lost grin mouse tailcity
reverse expected abnormality to normality
no rules, rules are, inverted showing
turn away to get where you’re going
don’t eat with expectation that it is what sees
wonderland is full of antipathies
I researched the poem on the Victorian Web website.
10 thoughts on “Alice in Wonderland Poem”
This poem is amazing! 🙂 Do you mind if I use it for my English project? I’ll credit you, what’s your name by the way?
Yes of course Courtney. Glad you like it. My name’s Marc Latham. Have a great week!
Thanks so much and you have a great week also! 🙂
i thought your poem was amazing.
do you mind if i use it in my english also? c:
all rights to you
Of course Sammy, and thanks for the compliment. Good luck with it. Cheers.
well done 🙂 really good i found the poem gr8 im uploading it to facebook now keep writing more poems !!!!
Thanks Louise, that’s great news. Have a great day/weekend/week!