
Equinox Poem for the March Celebrations

Marc Latham’s new Folding Mirror poem celebrates the arrival of spring in the northern hemisphere. And here it is:
Ring a Ding Ding, it’s Spring
green is the trampoline
into spring
bounce on sunshine
cross the finishing line
long evenings of light
bing bang dynamite
vernal equinox unlocks equator
ending cold explosives
short dark days unfolded
started early last year
increased risk hypothermia
goodbye winter
white slippery ice fear
After the serious topic of the first folding mirror the next few mixed nature, football and comedy as their subjects, and the one featured below managed to combine two of the three.
The poem uses the equator as the folding middle line, and mirrors the north (top half) and south (bottom half) poles.
Structurally, the poem succeeds in mirroring the word count and metre of the lines in each half, but the punctuation doesn’t mirror.
With the words, watch how gloom and room switch between the outer and next to outer lines in the two halves of the poem.
Both halves contain references to the cold and solitude in the poles, but the life form chosen for the top half is more humouros and the bottom half more tragic.
Enjoy!
Long way from the Equator
Mountains of ice, winter gloom.
Not many people, plenty of room.
Polar bears,
get plenty of stares
Long way from the Equator
Scott and Oates lost
their lives,
Humans are rare, plenty of gloom,
Icebergs of doom, winter room.