To lOve abOve (two)
O central abOve O,
can U C? (a little self-parody!)…
Really see/sea
promising peaceful clarity
beyond shape circularity...
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I Criticise to Keep Consonants Company
I: Only Vowel for Criticism
crit-i-cism
i: 33.3% recurring
central
i two more, either side i
stand beside
another letter
third – i – seventh
like sent-i-nels guarding flanks
right – left
i: only vowel
without i
there would only be
consonants for criticism.
If you want to criticise the last four lines (putting a positive spin on it, and not wanting to waste the extra work, as in a state of coffilosophy {with Nordic chanting music] I forgot using criticism at the start of the poem, and used criticise, making me second-think I’d got it wrong about i being the only vowel!):
i: 75% of vowels
if i buzzed off
there would only be-e
four consonants to criticise
reminding me of the film:
Four Weddings and a Funeral!
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